The blogging experience in the english class, it has been very complicated for my, because is a mixture between two things that they are not like too much, but i have to do. For this im not enjoyed this expiererience however it has served me for to learn english. Really it has served me very much.Also the blogging experience has served me because before of this expierence, I did not know much about the blogs in generally.
In first point, related to the advanteges that has the blogging experience, in my opinion they are the following ones. One positive aspect about the blogging experience, is the posibility for to lear to do a blog, this was very important for my. Another positive aspect of it is the oportunity for to practic individually the english.
In second point, related to the disadvantages that has the blogging experience, personally, i believe that it has some. One negative aspect about the blogging experience, it relates with the blogs, because i didn't know how they were working, this because in an occasion i closed my blog, but i had not saved the text and this one was eliminated automatic; but thanks to the help of someone that she knew since the blogs work, i could rescue the information. Another negative aspect of the blogging experience is that in the room of computation the computers are very slow and specially the old computers.
In relation to the topics, the topic that i like the most was the that i wrote about the page of internet related whit my career, where i wrote of terrorismo audiovisual, which is a site (is a blog-site), where there are audio-visual documentaries related whit the society and the sociology.
In conclusion i would like to give a suggestion for that this activity. It would be ideal that the schedule of the laboratory was more earlier, this.
Gustavo,
ResponderEliminarI hope next term you have a better experience using blogs. Remember that it makes a crucial difference to combine the classes with your fellow classmates, where you have the chance to learn new things and practice your English, with the lab where you put into practice what you’ve learned. I´m sure if you had attended more classes you wouldn’t have made some of the mistakes I’ve pointed out below.
Thank you for your conmments and suggestions
(The blogging experience ... it has been very complicated)/ (One negative aspect ..., it relates with...): double subject: experience = it / aspect = it.
(because [.....] is a mixture): subject missing
(two things that they are not like too much): This is not very clear.
(im not enjoyed this expiererience): Please visit website to practice tha simple past: Ex. I didn’t go, we didn’t travel / She didn’t like it / I didn’t enjoy ... / etc.
Some sites: http://www.ego4u.com/en/cram-up/grammar/simple-past
http://www.isabelperez.com/happy/tenses/past_simple.htm
http://ignacoll-myownspace.blogspot.com/2009/03/basic-english-grammar-simple-past-tense.html
(for to learn english.): To express a purpose just say: to + verb. Ex. I went to the shop to buy some coffee, She just called to say hello, I need help to move this table, etc.
(in generally.)In general
(In first point,) Firstly / To begin with/ First of all – Secondly/ Then – After that – Next - Finally
(related to): To introduce a topic: With regards to/ Regarding/In relatiopn to/ etc.
(that has the blogging experience) The word order is: that the blogging experience has (subject + verb)
(for my.): for me.
(someone that she knew since the blogs work): someone who knew how ...
(the topic that i like the most) was the that i wrote about ): the topic that i LIKED the most) was the ONE IN WHICH i wrote about
(the schedule of the laboratory was more earlier, this.): the schedule of the laboratory was/WERE [......] earlier, THAT’S ALL.